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The Ultimate Punishment
by TrueZero
To their parents, Martin and his four friends were as troublesome as
could possibly be. They were only sixteen, and they already were on the road
to prison. They drank, did drugs, constantly defied and challenged their
parents, and recently were released from Police custody after breaking in to
an old man's house and damaging several items on his property, and stealing
others. Their parents were at their wits' end. How would they make their
sons into more upstanding members of society? Well, after several meeting on
the weekends after letting their kids go out to get some time away from
them, they came up with the perfect idea.
It wasn't until a month later that their plans were done, and a further
month and a half until the results were ready to be put into effect, but
today the waiting was over, it was time for the five boys to receive their
punishment, and to finally take it to heart, because they knew that after
today, their teenagers would be a lot easier to handle, and actualy worth
something for once in their lives.
The first weekend of their Easter Holidays was a welcome time for the
boys, they had arranged to meet up at Martin's house and then play some
video games up in his room. Their mothers had gone with them aswell, they
had told their sons that they were meeting up with each other in Martin's
house for Coffee. As soon as all four of Martin's friends were up in his
room, and busy playing games, the plan was put into motion.
It was about Eleven O'Clock, two hours since they had arrived, before
Martin's mum, Mrs. Andrews, called the five down to give them a quick
announcement. The five boys came down and into the dining room, where the
four mothers were sat at the table, and five spare chairs were set out for
each boy. Mrs Andrews motioned to the chairs.
"Take a seat." She said bluntly. The boys sat down and waited. The
mothers looked at their sons.
Martin was a smallish boy, with messy brown hair and piercing blue eyes,
his clothes were usually a black pair of jeans with several rips and tears
and a red T-Shirt with one sleeve torn off and the other torn off just
before the shoulder. You usually never saw him without a toothpick in his
mouth, as he insisted it make him look cool.
His friends looked like they came from all kinds of backgrounds.
Louis Fisher was a large kid in terms of height, and he looked more like
he was 18 instead of only 16, he had deep green eyes and incredibly short
jet black hair, he wore a basketball shirt and a long pair of blue jeans.
Like Martin, he and the others all had toothpicks in their mouths, as it was
also a way to identify who was in their group as well as a fashion
statement.
Marco Hopkins was a boy with a similar build to Martin, he was small and
had pretty much the same muscle density. He wore a Green and Blue version of
Martin's outfit, only with the sleeves kept on, unlike the others, he also
had a bandana around his neck. He had deep brown eyes and dark brown hair
with a hint of blond.
Sam Barker had a medium build and a decent muscle density, he had a black
T-Shirt and black jeans on, and also a wristband on his right wrist. His
eyes were a shocking blue and his hair was black with crimson streaks, his
hair was long enough to pass his eyes, however he kept it gelled back.
Leon Hopkins, Marco's brother, was a larger boy, more bulky than the
others, he originally wasn't intended to be accepted into the group, but
after he brutally beat up a kid who had begun mocking him, the other four
began to see some chance in him, and let him into the group to act as some
muscle. He had the same colour eyes as Marco, but slightly lighter hair. He
wore a torn black pair of jeans and an electric blue T-Shirt.
The four mothers continued,
"As you obviously know, you were recently released from Police custody,
at our expense, we were planning to use the money we shelled out at the
station to get you boys College dorm rooms when the five of you leave high
school, now however we aren't even sure you'll get into college, and as a
result, years of saving has gone down the drain in an afternoon, well, our
punishment for you has taken all this time to prepare, and now it's time for
the months of work to be rewarded." Mrs. Andrews explained, Martin looked at
her and smirked.
"What's our punishment then?" He said mockingly, as if challenging the
mothers.
"Well, over the past month and a half you were listening to your
favourite songs during the time you were in the house, and during that time
your brain has had hypnotic suggestions implanted within your subconcious,
for example," Mrs. Fisher explained, taking a small item out of her purse
and holding it up for the boys to see. It was a tube of bright red lipstick.
"Louis, take this lipstick and put it on."
"Yeah right, like I'd... do..." Louis replied, trailing off, as soon as
he had stopped talking, he had gotten up and was walking over to his mother.
He took the lipstick, put it on, and passed it back to his mother. "What the
hell did I just do?"
"That demonstrates our power over you. The five of you have been
hypnotised with a trance so strong that only we can break it. You will be
forced to obey every command we give, and as a way to kee yourself safe from
accidental triggering, you will only obey the commands of your mother." Mrs
Hopkins said, smiling. "And when we do give you a command, you will be
forced to obey it without fail, now boys, we're going home to continue your
punishment, come along. Oh, and thanks for the coffee Lisa." She added,
getting up and thanking Mrs. Andrews. As she left the room Marco and Leon
were unable to stop themselves from following her. Mrs. Barker and Mrs.
Fisher got up and left too to continue their sons' punishments, they had
arranged to meet up again later on, after the boys had been given the
'proper attire'.
Their payback had begun...
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